jus, saying, you rushed through your plot at an abnormal pace and your balance in style is what grabs your readers. mind you- you need to pick up subscriptions in every post so you need to slow the tempo and allow oobs to hop on-jus sayin... its the medium and direction you opted for, maximize that.... every episode should pretty much be a mini thriller
jus, saying, you rushed through your plot at an abnormal pace and your balance in style is what grabs your readers. mind you- you need to pick up subscriptions in every post so you need to slow the tempo and allow oobs to hop on-jus sayin... its the medium and direction you opted for, maximize that.... every episode should pretty much be a mini thriller
actually I'm imitating howard tyler's daily webcomix.
instead of a four panel illustration I'm writing a small episode.