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Oh, heady stuff. Nice pace to it!

Oh, yes, the pace! That "swift as a tiger pouncing" pace, the drive, in this series. I love it!

A very fine piece of writing. You can really set a scene.

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Thank you @deirdyweirdy. Descriptive narrative has always been my strong point with dialogue being the thing I have to work on the most ;-) I appreciate your feedback and comment :-)

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