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RE: The Allies of Old, Book Two Renewal: Chapter Three "The Unknown"

in #fiction7 years ago

"She thought about Josh’s big warm arms surrounding her with comfort and nodded again with a bit more force."

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"Anna kissed his cheek affectionately then turned to Mathias and held out her arms. He pulled her into his broad chest briefly and patted her head affectionately. “You take care of yourself, our race depends on it you know.”

She nodded and turned to Seth who squeezed her shoulder and kissed her cheek."


Anna better be careful being overly affectionate to anyone she cares about with Jared possibly catching a situation the wrong way and overreacting. Her lack of consideration for this detail is irksome lol I can picture Jared ripping Josh apart like a rag doll, and pummelling Seth, Michael & Coderin with ease

Can't wait to learn more of Jess, great chapter my friend

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It's funny you mention that about her affection and Jared, it might come into play at some point...Anna has a tendency to be a bit naive and thoughtless about such things ;)

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'kay, doing that now :)

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