Beautiful story @iamthegray. This not only a story but also a message passed, never deceive the gods. The flow of the story was well written and a lot of imagination was put into your story. You have wrote this while the ideas flow in your mind or you already have a draft story painted in your mind before you started it? Have you participated in any short story contest organized for steemians? If not, you should check it out. You got talent in story writing.