What a nice story @blueteddy, the continuation of the story flew very well. It doesn't felt disconnected from the previous part. I love how you twisted the story but yet, the storyline still intact. This was first time I came across a passing of the story. It looks fun. Luckily you have included the previous story in your post, or else, I sure lost when i read your story alone.:P
So, in every end of the story, the author will pass to a name person to continue the story is it? It like a story chain. Now i wonder who going to end this story hehehehe.. and i cannot wait to see the next one on how she turn the story.