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RE: Asleep in Nara, Part 11 (Crossing and Dwelling)

in #fiction6 years ago

Hey @michaias, to name each chapter was a good idea. It look more organize and attractived. Hmm with a song in this chapter it new to me 😀. The more i read this story, i felt a mix feeling between Sebastian and Phersephone. I could feel the happiness of Sebastian with phersephone, but he still want to kill her. Meanwhile phersephone also reacted the similar way.She still protected her partner. And your story become more clearer the motive of Phersephone which i always wonder 😝 Now have to wait for your next chapter.

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