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RE: The Tower of Benshi - Part 2 (Swords of Saint Valentine)
I enjoy the little details and flourishes in your writing:
"He saw that where the blood landed, the grass died"
Incredibly evocative. I can see that happening in my head.
Thanks lol
I'm usually one of those "less is more and tiny details here and there make the story more real than reams of exposition" kind of writers. Nowadays I think they're called "lazy," but it's what Howard did and he's better than anyone writing nowadays, so I think I'd rather take notes from him.