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RE: SHORT FICTION - When the Levee Breaks
You really weave an oppressive atmosphere of despair, and then the hope at the end feels much sharper.
Now I want to know how it turns out.
You really weave an oppressive atmosphere of despair, and then the hope at the end feels much sharper.
Now I want to know how it turns out.
Thank you for your comment and feedback. I do try to lay down an noticeable emotional atmosphere in my writing. Not easy though. Glad you could feel it.
As for how it turns out. I left the reader with a glimpse of the emergence of hope. That's all I can offer at the moment.