Creepy as hell… but this line popped me out of the story for a moment:
When she returns, I feel her slip a surgical mask over my face.
Creepy as hell… but this line popped me out of the story for a moment:
When she returns, I feel her slip a surgical mask over my face.
Great catch, friend! Bit of a lapse in continuity there. Hopefully my quick rewrite fixes the immersion.