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RE: Nathan's waterfall: A 50-word short story
I was going to write something similar, but I think you hit it on the head with this one. Now I feel like I should try and find a completely different way to end it. Something that doesn't involve Nathan dying.
Or aliens.
Hmm. Aliens did not occur to me at all.
Ohhh... aliens. There's another good theory!