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RE: Art Writing Contest #4 - Mango's Last Dance
Wonderfully dark and gloomy. The ribbon floating on the water at the end was a good touch. Are we meant to wonder what might have actually happened to Mango, or is it a more simpler statement of lost childhood?
I guess it depends on the reader. I like non-endings endings, though this particular one was pretty final (to me) when I wrote it :-)