Great story. I like that it ended in a less than 'happy ending' manner. The story up to that point read well, and it needed an impactful ending to seal the deal. To me you accomplished that.
Great story. I like that it ended in a less than 'happy ending' manner. The story up to that point read well, and it needed an impactful ending to seal the deal. To me you accomplished that.
Thank you for the kind words @naquoya, and glad you enjoyed the ending.