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RE: ADSactly Sci-Fi - Outer Earth Series 'The One Eyed Man (Part 2)'
I like the direction this story is taking. There is a more detailed development and description of the actions and characters. Through The Man with One Eye (Mr. Albright) we are learning about the dystopian reality that exists in the year 3363, a consequence of many actions that may even be taking place at this time (the wink to France and the yellow vests was clear). I'd love to see him dwell more on the description of the characters and the city, perhaps a dark, devastated tone, between advance and retreat, would be the perfect painting for this story. I'm enjoying reading it, @zentalk. Thank you for sharing.
Thanks Nancy! Yes, the city needs to be developed a lot more as not much as been said about it. I'm thinking a sort of cross between some of the cities in blade runner and the more modern sci fi movies like the redo of total recall. Thanks for the ideas, this really helps.