I like that you're putting this story out chapter by chapter for 2 reasons: 1. I enjoy serials. Reminds me of when I read The Green Mile. I'm just glad I don't have to wait months for the next part. ;) and 2. It keeps bringing readers back to your page. I know I'll be back for more.
Mo
it's 80K words....I figure a hundred 'chapters".
perhaps I should have said 'episode"?
I dunno..
I'm trying to present one .....'scene' at a time..
Nah. Chapters is good. I have one that I wrote for my first flash fiction piece that seems to keep growing in my brain. If you'd like to read it and let me know what you think. I may expand on that one. You're a great writer. I love when I can see what I'm reading - I have a very vivid imagination.
ah...I love it when readers speak that way about me..
thanks so very much.