Hey Gray! That was brilliant. I love the time travel you did there. I however found too many typos, and because this is a brilliant story that is otherwise so well written, if you have this in an editor, maybe HackMD or Google Doc, I will try to do some edit with you. Let me know if you're game.

I should add this, it's a personal joy when I see a Nigerian post some valuable stuff on here, Trust me I know it is rare. Keep them coming. I follow you now :)