Hi @cheekah,

I think you have a writing talent as you can easily convey the character troubling feeling and her confusion.

However, as a reader, I had a hard time following what was going on. Who came, who was laying down on the floor, why did she have these visions, was it, indeed, an alian encounter? I cannot say after reading this story.

I think you should make the story a little bit more systematic. I cannot look into your head. Everything should be explained to a reader.

Good Luck to you!