where do i start from @warpedpoetic.............

Great vivid expression i must confess bro, nice play on the characters and their personae and a whole great play on the suspense all through to the very end........kudos

Your interludes.........love the way they take the reader adrift from the reality of the plot at hand, and by the way wonderful rhymes you got there in these interludes also

and the revelations that comes afterwards got me like......what???? really......Martha???? damn that threw me off guard bro

The epilogue......epic indeed in every sense of the word only thing is it got me yearning for more.

keep it up you truly are a prolific witer @warpedpoetic