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RE: Heart's a Mess (Short Story - Horror)
Hot dang, you are so excellently descriptive in your writing, I loved the turnaround where Rosie was no victim.
And of course, full marks for the use of boom :0D
Thank you, I appreciate it. The turn around felt very organic as I wrote it, which added to the mystery and horror element of the story.
As for the boom, every aspiring author needs to embrace it. Very glad you noticed it :D
How could I fail to see ;0)
The organic ones are always the best when it just flows out and happens