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RE: A Day in the Clouds (Chapter 24) - The Hours Between 0400 and 0500
Aw Isle La View indeed! What a lovely ending man. It was a tearjerker and a half reading his acceptance that perhaps all was not as he saw it.
Well done mate!
Aww thanks, dude! I hope you get to read the SILVER LINING immediately after. Did the delay in reading the ending affect the emotional aspect of it?
You know I think it did. Had I been reading it continuously without the gap it would have had more punch! Not that that takes away anything from it!!
Haha! Now I don't know if I should tell you "tsk" or "aww that's too bad :(" I shall endeavor to write something that packs the same punch even if the chapters are read years apart haha
I would go for tsk, I did have a good reason though!!! :O)
Spending time with your family on vacation isn't a good reason ... It's a great reason, dude! :D
Yay!! It is indeed!
I couldn't help but look forward to the day when vacations are the norm, and we're getting paid to take them.
"Do I have to? I mean, do I really have to go to the Maldives again? Ugh. Fine."
I said something similar the other day, when we relax all year and then have to work for two weeks hehe