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RE: The Christmas gift - A Christmas story - Chapter 1

in #fiction7 years ago

I could sense some conflicts of interest from this beautiful story; mom found consolation and love in Jack but Jonah isn’t too lucky, has he become an intruder between Jack and his mom, why should Jack hate him that much? Well, I guess because he is a man, whenever Jack step his eyes on Jonah; he sees Jonah’s dead father in Jonah and that makes him uncomfortable.

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Well once again I have no idea how this is going to end up. Keep those ideas coming then I can build my story around it..lol

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