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RE: Horror Vacui - Finish the Story Submission #26
I like the intro you wrote, making clear your feelings and thoughts about the story prompt.
And, of course, I like very much your ending. You mastered the reference and used it for a metaphor about life. The detail of the doctor dress and jewels , with their price, is a nice way to show the dichotomy between the fullness of having and the emptiness of being.