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RE: Finish the Fiction Story Contest - Week #8
You continued your nice story, and now I'm hooked up and want to read how will going on...
but, you didn't explain the intuiton that led the a.i. to come out into the open ;)
Must be a misunderstanding. Thought we needed a flashback scene. Included it althought brief. Also, little confused on Arioch's Singularity. Is it the AI? Or is it about Shintiara and the black hole.
If this story continues, then this scene foreshadows that X00-711 has experienced the singularity and that it's the key to saving the planet. Also, thought of a scene in the future with Sassy and the scientists explaining to her what you're asking for maybe. More on the same lines as your extention on @f3nix's post. And what you're referring to here. Could include in a comment?
Oh, you're free to write what you want. It's a nice story! I don't want to criticize :)
However the contest as @f3nix intended is: he writes the first part of a story, every participant continues from that point forward. And the first part of this week was about how a scientist discovered that the little teddy bear was faking not having reached the singularity, i.e. the moment in which a superhuman intelligence awakens in a machine (the teddy bear himself). If you included this in your story, I wasn't able to notice it... but whatever, it's a nice Shintiara inspired story, go on! ;)
Ha ha. Yeah thought we were doing scenes. All good. Might write something in the comments later. Still, is Arioch's Singularity about AI or the black hole.
About the A.I. I suppose ;)
Cool mon. Check out @xtdevelopment if you get a chance. They're developing AI. Heavy stuff. Helping with this story idea. They post promote as well. Going to hit them up on this one right now.
And done. Added to the story borrowing from yours a little.
Wow! I'm honored! Some serious action and a very good explanation of the awakening of the Arioch Singularity! Bravo!
Hey pals! First of all congrats to Cyrus, you put effort and the results are clearly there. I want to make two points: you are free to elaborate what you prefer ad long as we have fun together! The singularity is a flashback in Xoo-711 future, hence it happened between the Shintiara/collapsed-Murya world and a future Shintiara in which A.I. are controlled by superego systems. About the challenge, my episodes will hardly be connected one with the other, as the stand-alone scene/short story is what everyone usually want and like. Long episodes story usually don't work in steemit and everyone that comes in the contest has to feel at ease, not in the middle of events without understanding 😉 what we do here with Shintiara is just exploiting an interesting frame-environment.. Cyrus bravo and keep it up!