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RE: Jophi's Journey: Part 6 : A Steemit Fiction Series
Her muscles ached and her Jophi approached her door
There is one "her" too much in the sentence, good read otherwise.
Her muscles ached and her Jophi approached her door
There is one "her" too much in the sentence, good read otherwise.
Thanks! That's what I get trying to finish in a hurry, I miss stupid stuff, haha. It's fixed!