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RE: Sarah, Returned--Chapter 42 (A Steemit Original Novel)

in #fiction7 years ago

I meant to say this on yesterday's chapter, but it was a busy day and I never got chance. If Sarah goes straight back now, she will reverse age back to being a teen or pre teen, and won't be the mother they know and need. She doesn't seem to have thought that through. She could live in modern times for 10-14 years or so, then go back to them and be about the right age. Best of both worlds.

Wonder who is coming through the portal. Grandma? or somebody else....

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Dun-dun-DUNNNN! Lol!

No, she hasn't thought it through. All she's thinking is she's desperate to get back to Joshua and the kids. She could easily reverse age back to 12, like the first time she went through, and be the same age as Hannah when she got there.

She can't stand being away from them, but look at what her grandmother does....she goes away for decades at a time, and comes back seconds after she left, sometimes far younger than when she left.

Let's just say the person who opened the portal at the top of the hill is a BIG surprise.

I've got a picture of me walking around in the snow on top of Garrison Hill in January of 2006. It was freaking FREEZING up there. I keep looking for it so I can post it here. It's in a huge cache of photos somewhere.

Exactly! She can just take a chill pill, and take her time getting back. She can have so many different lives over time, and that's just one. Once she realises she can go back at her leisure and they will still be the same, maybe she will relax a bit :-)

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