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RE: Day 704: 5 Minute Freewrite: Tuesday - Prompt: No trespassing
From the bitch of Singapore to whisky to calm the nerves to the pudgy husband Ron to the transformed Ron playing a game in 'virtual reality'...........I was on the edge of my seat unable to begin to anticipate the conclusion.
It came as a jolt! What lives they had .....utterly amazing to someone like me, a dreamer and story teller of 'under'ordinary pretentions.
Definitely beyond my choice of genre but I enjoyed being pushed to keep up with this creative fast paced story.
Well written.
LOL. Thank you! Well as I told you my life turned out in such a way that it was quite diluted from human contacts. So my main source of stories is imagination. Anyhow... Glad you liked it!