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RE: Riding the Rails - Art Prompt Writing Contest
Oooh! Very nicely done. I love the slow unveiling of the backstory and how much is left unknown, yet the tale you tell is perfectly complete unto itself. Good luck!
Glad you enjoyed it! With a limited wordcount its a challenge to explain too much of the world around the characters, so I prefer to leave it up to the reader to fill in the gaps. Works fine as long as the reader has an imagination!
It worked very well here!