Wow, thanks @madlila, what a cool pic! You are so right about reading aloud. Even in my real-life job, which involves summarizing legal documents and such, I tell the crew to read their work aloud. They never listen lol. So many people will have whole words just missing and I know if they read it out loud they would slow down and catch that.

It sounds like you would bring a lot to the workshop, maybe even how to write better dialogue (which I need lol). We would love to see you there. I'm going to check out your blog now but be sure to give me a holler if you come by PALnet :)