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RE: Sunday Story Time: Faulty Warp Core

in #fiction7 years ago

Rather interesting. It's a lot of dialogue and very little description. It reads more like a TV script than a book. But I enjoyed all of the little easter eggs planted therein.

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Yeah, that was pretty much the vibe I was experimenting with. I've found that scripts create quite immediate images in the mind that help with giving a sort of 'high speed' pace to the short. So when it's basically a chase scene as the main context, it seemed fitting to try make it 'read' at a faster pace than we usually encounter.

And then used the absence of names to add a touch of chaos for the same kind of effect.

Glad you enjoyed it.

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