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RE: ADSactly Sci-Fi : Outer Earth Series 'The One Eyed Man (Part 5)'
I think you solve Albright's encounter with Mork quite well, which was predicted to be very tense and difficult. The dialogue is well developed, with a procaz language typical of these vulgar and rude characters, violent and sharp. Although I'm not familiar with the sophisticated world of technology, I sense that you present it with verisimilitude. Finally, the story progresses in an interesting way. Watch out for its continuation, which now has the challenge with Derek. Thank you, @zentalk.
Absolutely, I tried to really build the tension before the meetup. Beyond that the conversation itself was intended to build up even more tension until it got to a final tipping point and eased off. The technological aspects are sort of based on things I know about future tech from writing about it in articles but even more of it is just coming from my wildest imagination of what things could be like. That's what I've found most enjoyable about writing this story. The sandbox is very expansive. The mind is the best builder of all and thats why books can be so much more enjoyable than movies because the production budgets of our imagination are essentially unlimited, we are capable of so much creativity!