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RE: The Tree Of Akpobrisi

in #fiction6 years ago

This is totally amazing, wow I mean the African setting was well embodied, it's set in the south southern region of Nigeria west Africa and you're probably one of the best folk tale story writer (prose fiction) i've ever seen.
I mean the way you used imagery to paint picture of the goats and dogs at the beginning really, it made me get a vivid picture.
Akpobrisi a god who is just and kind seems really angry at the man peeling off the tree bark.
I enjoyed reading this, it's amazing

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