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RE: "The Bulwark's Shadow" - A Novel in Progress via Steemit (Part I, Chapter 9)
@bucho Hi, well i saw a little of the other chapters, its quite awesome the way you dabble into anecdotes and philosophies your vocabulary is quite top notch, your
Ideas are laudable, however you need a little humor to rekax the scenario.
while i get what you're saying, i don't think humor is the right fit for this particular story. it's not a happy book or a story that really allows for a lot of legitimate humor. could it use something to break up all the bleak narratives? absolutely. i don't know that humor is the way to go though.
thanks for reading and commenting! i do appreciate the insight!
Yeah the truth is humor varies a lot, and if you really think about this im sure you will see. The boom is not a total tragedy, so
i mean...i know there's plenty of different kinds of humor. the book is definitely leaning more towards tragedy than comedy. it's not a happy book and there's literally zero intent on my part to change that. there's little to no humor in most of my writing and that's unlikely to change; it's just not my style.