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RE: Poetic Justice (Short Fiction)

in #fiction5 years ago

The streets ran like a river with the morning's torrential downpour. These Chicago streets were his. He walked like a hyena, looking for any weakness, looking for a mark.

I was blinded by the many Imageries, there was this heightened thoughts inside of me and it was really constantly increasing as I kept reading I won't lie to you I was paying attention to how much you could continue and you really did surprise me at the end he was a fest of beautiful instances I could really see every image come alive. Another thing was that it was very brief it made it easy to concentrate not lose focus and I wouldn't lie, best I've read that you've written

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Hi Jose.

Thanks for your awesome comment m8. I thought this short story was reasonably good when I was editing it, but it's gr8 to hear that you thought so too.

I'm gearing up to get cracking on a big writing project outside of steem and this has got me enthusiastic for the challenge.

Glad you enjoyed the imagery and twist at the end. Ha ha, imagine if someone really had the power to cause people to swap bodies, I think there's probably more than one story in the premise 😂

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I'm gearing up to get cracking on a big writing project outside of steem and this has got me enthusiastic for the challenge

That's definitely going to be challenging, but w ll I think you should consider doing an ebook for Amazon could be another possible way to monetize your amazing contents it's quite a hassle but you should consider it

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