Deleted IV (IV)johnkingwriter (54)in #fiction • 7 years ago (edited)This is the fourth in a series. If you are new to it then start at the beginning. #story #writing #fantasy #serial
Not enough "dog emptying" in this chapter, but otherwise a masterpiece.
Thanks, Zombie. High praise indeed :)
Ah, of course Shadow is her dog. I see what you did there, all trickstery and leaving me thinking something dark and mysterious. Narrows eyes
He is dark and mysterious. And smelly. And impulsive...
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Spectacular tale. And wonderful, rich, beguiling writing. The small, readable passages make this so haunting and thrilling to read.
Jayna, I'm going to hire you to do the back cover of my first book! Your comments are wonderful.
Thank you.
Ha ha, that would be fun! Must one bring objectivity to the table? I’m afraid I’m too much of an obsequious fan for that!
Objectivity is deeply over-rated! Enthusiasm is everything :)