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RE: Fire On The Bayou - Part 3
Oh it gets worse. And then it gets even worse than that. There's a reason this story is taking 6 parts to tell the whole thing. Mostly I wanna keep it punchy so that people don't get bored by it, or think a particular part goes on too long, but partly it's to keep the tension and suspense going.