SINGA-ONE: The State of Fun

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singaone
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Dinesh raised his arms up for the 30th time that day, as the rollercoaster descended down into a corkscrew rail. Meanwhile, his brother, Manish, was busy thumbing his phone throughout the entire ride. Both of them were impassive, even yawning a few times during the whole thing. They still get the occasional tingle, but most of it were expected even before they hit. All the twists and turns had become commonplace.

    "Hey," Dinesh muttered as the coaster came to a grinding halt. He flicked Manish's arm, just as both of his were on their way down. "What's the count?"

    "One more time in the log jam, and we're done for the day," answered Manish, whose eyes were still glued to his mobile device. His implants allowed him the capability to have an eidetic memory, but he mostly put it to use memorizing trivial information. "We could go to that 4D one, but that'll take three more turns."

    "Nah, the one ride in the log jam is fine."

Ever since Singapore became the fifth country to adapt a fully-automated workforce, its citizens had been automatically enrolled to a Universal Basic Income structure. However, since one of its driving sources of income remains to be tourism, it had to keep up appearances of being a thriving and inviting place for foreigners. To help with the initiative, it mandated its citizens to populate the tourist destinations. The conditional release of their income depends on whether they meet a weekly quota of attractions they visit.

The brothers each waved their wrist above the turnstiles to allow them access, and to log their activity. They hopped into an artificial log, then flexed their muscles while posing for a complimentary photo, as their carriage made its way down the steep flume. Both of them tried their best to flash a smile, but all they could muster was a deadpan expression.

As they made their way out, they were greeted by a notification informing them that their weekly allowance had been released to their bank accounts. It was the same routine they had been doing for all of their lives, which somewhat made them feel condemned to a life of drudgery. Their parents and other elderly people often recalled a time when they had to work for a living, but the younger generation simply couldn't relate to the stories. All of their complaints were met with disgust, and were dismissed as a result of entitlement.

    "Tell mom I'll be home late," Dinesh bid his brother farewell as he headed down to the train station. "Don't wait up."

Manish waved at him, as he headed home. His eyes were still glued to his mobile device, but he expertly evaded everything in his path. Between him and his brother, they had managed to save up more than a million STEEM, but they were simply uninterested in moving out of their parents' house. In fact, most of the younger generation didn't feel the urge to get their own place.

Dinesh boarded the train at Harbourfront, transferred to the North-South Line at Dhoby Ghaut, then got off at Somerset. What would normally take people from other countries a little under an hour and several STEEM costed him less than 10 minutes and about 0.001 STEEM. The younger generation were so used to this luxury that they often took it for granted.

Walking on Orchard, he chanced upon several youth huddled around in a well-known trap street. Being the inquisitive type, he snuck up on them and tried to ascertain what shenanigans they were into. He noticed that there were no CCTV cameras in the vicinity, and that there were no other witnesses nearby. Dinesh took online Krav Maga lessons, so he felt like he could fend off five aggressors easily, if it ever came down to it.

The youth kicked around a street sweeper bot, that was malfunctioning since its navigation systems didn't recognize its location. They even made a game out of it, with the person who finishes the bot off was declared the winner. There wasn't a prize, nor a grand announcement, just the satisfaction of beating the life out of a defenseless machine.

    "Hey!" one of the youth yelled, while pointing at Dinesh.

His heart sank to his stomach, and beads of sweat broke on his forehead. He wanted to run, but he felt his feet anchored to the ground. His mind cycled through different scenarios. There was one where he charged at them, flailing his feet and fist until they run away, but that required a lot of energy. Every possible scenario required some amount of energy, which he seemingly suddenly ran out of. All he could was stare at them with his mouth agape.

    "Come," the same person invited, beckoning to him with her hand. "Join us!"

    "W-Who?" Dinesh queried, pointing at himself. "Me?"

    "There is nobody else here. Now, come on!"

Destroying a property of the Singaporean government was punishable by law, but the youth got away with it by avoiding the cameras. If there was no evidence, no one would be convicted. They filled him in on what they were doing, as they continued to assault the helpless robot. At first, they had made a game of hiding from the cameras, but that quickly became boring. They kept elevating the level of difficulty, seemingly in a quest to get caught.

Soon after, Dinesh joined in on the action. There was something invigorating about the whole thing. He wasn't a vagrant, and he hasn't disobeyed the law ever in his life, but something inside him came alive. Disobedience somehow cut through the doldrum he had been feeling for a number of years now. It was the same feeling he had when he first tried out the rides at Sentosa when he was a child. Breaking the law gnawed at him, but it was surpassed by an even greater feeling. He felt alive, for the very first time in a long while.

He kicked as hard as he could, and was eventually the one to break the hapless bot. The group cheered, and brought Dinesh into the fold. They knew that the sweeper robot would send out a distress signal upon its destruction, so they collected each others' contact information just before they dispersed.

Upon his return home, Dinesh recounted his ordeal to his brother. Manish expressed his concern, but felt even more curious than his brother did on that trap street. It didn't take long for Dinesh to convince his brother to join whenever the group contacts him next. The fervor in his brother's voice is what drew Manish in.

The call came, and the brothers rushed to the specified location. Dinesh asked the group's permission to include his brother, and they quickly accepted him as one of their own. They jumped from bot to bot, property to property, with each encounter being riskier than the previous ones. The group did just enough t be inches from getting caught. It was exhilarating, and they felt an unmatched high from their illicit activities.

Manish studied how the group picked their marks, and eventually devised a more efficient algorithm to go about it. He shared it with his brother, hoping they could branch off, fearing that the group was becoming too large to go unnoticed. Dinesh hesitated, but figured it would be alright to strike out on their own some times and just meet up with the group whenever they can.

During one of their outings, they discovered that other people were doing the same thing. Little did they know that they had unknowingly been a part of a hidden network of vagrants for quite some time. It gave them a strange sense of relief, but it definitely took away some feeling of uniqueness. They knew better than to trust anyone, so they kept their real identities close to their chest.

There was a noticeable change in their demeanor. Instead of dragging their feet through rides and attractions, they became more chipper, excited to get to their illicit activities quicker. Dinesh felt more confident than he had ever been, and Manish didn't bury himself in his mobile device all that much anymore. To avoid being questioned about their late nights, they decided to get separate apartments, away from their parents.

The brothers went from wrecking sweeper bots, to hacking police drones, to defacing whole buildings. As their activities became grander, their exploits made their way to the news. While Dinesh felt worried that their covert operation would be compromised by increased surveillance, Manish felt even more challenged.

    "Maybe we should slow it down, yeah?" Dinesh asked over the phone. They spoke in code, since they weren't talking on an encrypted line. "I mean, 50 rides in a day is too much. People would be too tired seeing our face in the photowall."

    "Look, brother, I don't care" Manish retorted. "I haven't felt this good in a long time. So, if you want to take a breather, then by all means, go on back to your posse."

So, they did just that. Dinesh went back full-time with his original group, and Manish went on to solo outings. The brothers became estranged, and eventually lost touch.

Dinesh's group grew in numbers, but most of the new members became too unruly. The authorities planted a trap during one of their outings, but many of them were fortunate enough to not get caught. He counted himself as one of the lucky ones, and he knew that luck, unlike his STEEM, was in short supply. To help in laying low, he moved back to his parents' place and waited for the heat to die down. Life, for Dinesh, reverted back to his old normal. But, he felt incomplete.

He tried to contact his brother, but his calls were left unanswered. So, he decided to head to Manish's apartment to patch things up. As he headed up on the elevator, he felt a bit unnerved. Dinesh thought of several scenarios that could've happened to his estranged sibling. Manish could've been hooked on drugs, or have gotten tangled up with shady individuals—several horrible thoughts swirled in his head. When bad things happen to people, and he had the capability to stop them, he felt like all of those bad things were partly his fault.

Dinesh knocked on Manish's door, but there was no answer. He called to him, banging even louder, but still wasn't met with any reply. Out of desperation, he shorted Manish's doorlock and forced his way inside. Upon entering the room, he saw his brother sprawled in his bed. He dove in to check his pulse, and was glad to discover that his brother hasn't expired.

Manish panicked, but calmed down when he discovered that it was only his brother. His music was too loud, that's why he couldn't hear Dinesh knocking.

    "Yeh kyaa hai?" Dinesh angrily asked. "W-What the hell, man?"

    "Mein theek hoon," Manish excused. "I was ... I was asleep."

    "You ... I've been calling you. Why weren't you answering your phone?"

    "I was asleep, man. Come on!"

    "The whole day? Huh? The whole day yesterday, too?"

Manish stayed silent, thinking of a plausible excuse. It had been a month or so since he and his brother last spoke, so he didn't want the next thing he said to spark any unwanted animosity.

    "What ... I was just ... worried, I guess. It's been ... I don't know. All of those things in the news. I keep thinking one of those are your doing," Dinesh calmed down a bit, resting his back against a wall. "What are you ... What are you into these days anyway? Mom is worried. You haven't even bothered to call her for quite some time."

    "What are you talking about?" Manish queried. "Mom is always worried! I spoke to her, I don't know, two or three days ago. I don't check in for a day and it's like the whole world is ending."

The brothers laughed, and it cut the tension a bit. Manish sat up and invited his brother to sit back down.

    "I'm serious though," Dinesh followed. "I'm worried about you. What have you been up to these days? Did you know I was almost caught?"

    "I figured. Mom told me you moved back."

    "It was rough, I ... We were cornered. They're really cracking down on all the vagrancy. I came here to warn you about it."

    "Weeks after your ordeal?"

    "We had a falling out, I thought it would be a good lesson for you."

    "It wasn't needed," Manish reassured him.

    "What? Are you part of a group again? Have you been taking drugs?"

    "No, no. None of that."

    "Then what?"

Manish paused for a second, as he let out a long sigh. The delay didn't help ease Dinesh's worry.

    "Well? Come on, man," Dinesh begged. "Out with it!"

    "The truth is ... Well, I did try going solo for a bit," Manish divulged. "I have to say, it wasn't as easy as it seemed. Two or three times, then I ... I guess the thrill was gone. I just ... I just stopped."

Dinesh felt relieved, but didn't know how to react. The way Manish was going before they became estranged, he didn't think that Manish stopping was a remote possibility. All he could do was bob his head and smile.

Suddenly, a group of police busted through the door and demanded the brothers to raise their arms up, to which they complied. Dinesh had been caught by the CCTV breaking into Manish's apartment, alerting the authorities of a possible robbery. After a few hours of explanation, the brothers cleared the misunderstanding, and in the process, reconciled as well. They went back to their lives before everything happened, but fondly remembered the time they went on one of the wildest rides of their lives.



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Excellent post dear friend @jedau, admirable as always, you are a great profecional dear friend, congratulations for that talent you have, many times people must go through extreme situations to reconsider things, thank you dear friend for this great material.
Have a great start to the week

Thank you, my friend! :D I missed you on here, it's nice to have you back! Have a great start to the week as well :D

You were lost, I went through your blog and did not see anything new, I think you had a problem with internet communication if I did not misbehave
I send you a hug dear friend @jedau

You're right! Even now my internet isn't functioning properly. I really hope it gets sorted out soon because it's affecting my productivity. Thanks for sticking around, my friend!

Yay, you're back at it! And with such an interesting idea for a short story! A bit dystopian :)

I'm glad you didn't have it so one got caught or something terrible happened just to have a moral to the story, A beware of being bad lol. I like that they got away with it and get to fondly remember their time as being bad boys!

Can't wait for the next one !:)
(You know you could have used steem or crypto or whichever tag is trending :)

Am I back at it? Am I back at it though? The title did have "one" in it, so it might just be a one-off kind of thing haha! I'm writing my inspiration for the story as we speak, so I don't want to spoil it on the comments section just yet ;)

Manish has an eidetic memory, so even though Dinesh would ever forget the whole thing, he's forced to remember it for the rest of his life (or at least until he gets the implants removed haha!) OH SHOOT! I definitely forgot to tag STEEM!! Damnit!!! :'((((( I actually meant to do that argh!! I could've gotten tons more blind votes using that too....

Blind votes...lol, sadly true. You could still do it. I think it shows up in that tag if you change it.

Well, I certainly hope you're back at it :)

I'm averaging 19 votes with these, and by that I mean exactly 19 hahaha! I really didn't expect this to be my average heading into an anniversary post. We'll see... I can't help but think of the last time I did a major milestone post XD

Great story, Jed! The first rule of Dinesh/Manish Club is you don't talk about Dinesh/Manish Club! I liked the inclusion of STEEM, UBI, and mandatory fun. :)

HAHA! I had wished you would get around to reading this, and I'm glad you did :D As a fellow advocate of UBI, I'm sure you would have some thoughts regarding it. Granted, I wanted to make a "first world problem"/worst case scenario about the whole thing. They're complaining about being bored, because all they've ever known was UBI. If they would've gotten the chance to live in a world pre-UBI, I bet they would've been singing a different tune.

I wanted to craft a "dystopia" that's partly a utopia for some people. It depends on perspective, and I wanted to pose that kind of conundrum for the readers. I had just been made aware that I forgot to tag #steem in there, so that's my one big regret haha oh well.. Thanks for reading, Luke! I'm glad you enjoyed it :D

Meanwhile, his brother, Manish, was busy thumbing his phone throughout the entire ride.

So I first thought "must be a pretty lame rollercoaster" but you said there were corkscrews so now I'm pretty impressed at his ability to hang on to the damn thing XD

Dinesh took online Krav Maga lessons, so he felt like he could fend off five aggressors easily, if it ever came down to it.

I'm glad he didn't have to test that theory as I don't like how that would have ended (badly for him XD). Although seeing as they have implants maybe it's more "I KNOW KUNG FU" Matrix style? :D

I love how the utopia was somewhat dystopian and that ending was so sweet and terribly amusing XD

(also sounds like future-Singapore hasn't changed much from when I used to go there lol XD)

HAHAHA! I did want to give a sense that it was a boring rollercoaster, but in reality, it was really exhilarating! Haha!

They both have implants, but for different things. Dinesh doesn't have one that makes him instantly become an expert at martial arts though, so sadly, a Matrix-style sequence was not in the cards for him. The irony with him is how he's overconfident at time, yet so severely lacking in confidence in other situations. If anyone would ever invent an implant to balance that out, he should definitely sign up for it. Though I think he would be too proud to...

I love how the utopia was somewhat dystopian and that ending was so sweet and terribly amusing XD

YES! Slam dunk observation, mate! I knew you would be able to spot that :D A utopian dystopia is exactly how I structured it. "First world problems" are what I wanted to bring to the fore here. They're complaining about stuff that would otherwise be a luxury for others. It's all they've ever known and that's a bit sad, in a way. They're lucky, but they just don't know it.

I wanted to highlight the flying cars, but I was just so in love with the MRT that I couldn't even think of the other transportation in future-Singapura haha!

Thanks as always for the entertaining insights, my friend! I'm glad you enjoyed it :D

I wonder if I'll like the mrt these days. I remember hating it but i don't remember why, it was forever ago 😆 maybe it was just because there was no way past the gates, i hate those gates.

Oh, you'll love it! I swear to you! Coming from an MRT system where it's every man for himself, it's so refreshing to ride something where people are just so decent and orderly. The trains come on time, and the rates are so affordable!

You can feel the excitement in this one. The sense of anticipation, these people living on the edge so to speak. Whats going to happen. The writing conveyed that well. I liked these characters too. Slightly curious, slightly concerned, I had interest in them.

And nice curve at the end.

I think your preference to sci-fi carried it? If you were to rank your favorite of the four, is this your favorite? If it is, would reading it sequentially changed the order somehow? Sometimes, these tiny details make a world of difference.

As you may have noticed, I like to flip the script in unexpected situations. I had set up a dystopian story in a utopian society, where vagrancy didn't really have the consequences it's supposed to have. It's so much fun writing surreal stories, as we get the chance to bend the rules.

That's a good question. I'm not sure if the order I read them in played any role in my preferences. I have to really think about that. Initially I don't think so, but who knows. It is possible. For me it's hard to pick between this and the third one. Which is interesting as the third one takes on more of a Fantasy persona. Which shows how well you wrote it, as Fantasy doesn't always grab me as much as SciFi. But it can, and yours did.

It's great being able to explore the unexpected, or the so called unreal. Flipping contexts around and messing with realities. You did it well here, as all 4 stories had their own personality. I didn't feel like I was reading the same story twice.

That's a huge honor, brother! I'm glad you took a shining to it. Perhaps the Fantasy elements were beside the point. The action and the dynamic of the characters must've carried the whole piece.

I took special care in giving all of them their separate identities. It was hard since they were all set in the same country, so I just changed their genres to give their settings a different twist from one another. I'm glad it all worked out well. Huge praise from an author whose writing style I admire :D

All's well that ends well!! I had a forboding but it was unfounded. Great stuff bro, I will rack up the next.

Online krav maga, lol. Might not have ended well!

I really wanted to throw people off the scent haha! Great of you to notice that, broseph! I'm sure it would've ended fine for Dinesh, if by fine you mean he's sprawled up in a hospital bed somewhere suffering a comatose state. I'm glad you enjoyed it, dude! :D

Great story! I'm glad I found it before the 7 days were up.

Lots of imaginative bits in there. I love the concept of having to go on the rides to make them look popular. Even a supposedly fun thing gets boring when it's your job.

Woohoo! You found it in time! :D I have posted the inspiration to this a few days ago, I hope you find it interesting. It's entitled Into the Mouth of a Gigantic Merlion haha! We did lots of traveling, so that afforded me a lot of time to think. Guerrilla fiction writing, so to speak :D Thanks for stopping by, my friend!

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