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RE: A Day in the Clouds (Chapter 18) - The Hours Between 2200 and 2300
Thanks, brother! This was the first time I tried writing in the first-person, and telling different perspectives without writing them has been the most enjoyable aspect of it :D
Now that you're back, the rest of the chapters are here waiting for you to read them :D This chapter is kinda like a dark reflection of the more action filled earlier chapter that involved bath time. I'll discuss it further in this week's SILVER LINING so stay tuned for that ;)
Thanks for taking the time to read, bro. I really missed your comments on here :D
My bro, thanks for the great insights from your personal perspective. I can only guess everything flows to well because you it is all based on your real life experiences. Awesome stuff, man.
Sometimes I have to pinch myself and remember your whole book is all occuring in one day. Your pacing and flow of the story as top notch as well. I'm considering writing a first person short in a while and you can bet, I'll be using your work as my guiding tool.
Very well done again!!
I'm glad that my work influences you. That means a lot coming from someone whose writing style I admire greatly! A Day in the Clouds was highly influenced by The Symbiotic Protocol, too! So, I guess by being influenced, you're just carrying on that mutual streak. I can't wait to see the first person short you come up with, brother!