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RE: The Allies of Old, Book Two- Renewal: Chapter Twelve "Timely Interruption"

in #fiction7 years ago

Well that was weird indeed. Wasn't it just last night when Austin entered the inner circle? That was quick. Of all people, I didn't think Austin would be able to resist Anna's charms. And once again, she got away with something that she shouldn't have gotten away with haha The worse thing about it is that he was laying it on thick telling Anna of all her faults already. I just knew Austin would cave. I can't wait for Jared to blur right back.

His words hit her like darts

Awwwww didn't you get hit with a lawn dart to the head. First-hand experience! Triggered!

All in all, this was a nice chapter, sister! :D

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She's not so bad! She has a good heart, she's just a bit childish. Haha, she really gets on your nerves sometimes, huh?

Austin is the type of guy who would be pulled quickly into an inner circle, at least I feel that way, but especially now when they really can't afford to be too choosy. They need all the help they can get, so the usual processes are definitely sped up :)
I'll have to take a look at the last couple chapters, because I did want it to be clear that some time had passed while they were making plans to take down the demon.

Oh huh you're right.. Completely slipped my mind that the Sam entrapment came in the middle of it. My bad! I guess I was too anxious at the end of A Day in the Clouds. The last chapter is up :'( I feel antsy now that I don't have a clear path.

Maybe I've encountered way too many Anna's in my life to have to deal with another one haha I wouldn't have any problems if she was just fictional, but she feels so real! Ha! See what I did there? Sneak compliment to you, sister ;)

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