You are viewing a single comment's thread from:
RE: The Allies of Old, Book Two Renewal: Chapter Five "Dazed and Confused"
Oh shoot! I just knew that Austin would make an appearance! At first, I thought of commenting on the serene atmosphere, about how you set it up like Reborn as a calm before the storm. You have a way of writing calm scenes that really takes the reader into that relaxed mode.
It's a slight foreshadow when Anna stumbled upon classmates, as if she was in the cusp of regressing to her pre-vampire world. With everything that has happened to her, it would be interesting to see how she deals with people she interacted with during her more innocent phase. Great work, sister! :D
I'm glad you feel that way ;) One of the things I love about hearing your thoughts on it, is that the one thing I will never get to do with my books is read them for the first time, so to speak. I can re-read with fresh eyes a bit, but where every other book in the world I don't know exactly what will happen next, I don't get that experience with my own. I do get it a bit through your eyes though.
Thank you for your awesome comment my brother, it's a perfect way to start out my day (well in addition to sunrises ;)
Haha! It's great that you get to experience sunrises! The sun is already harsh when I get up usually :( I'm so happy that we get to provide that kind of service for each other. Warms my heart to no end :D It's the main benefit of writing alongside other writers, I guess :)
Actually the sun rise thing for me is pretty rare. I got inspired by the idea of getting pictures of it :) I did Cayuga Lake, next time I'll do my parent's lake-Seneca :) Then I might try different spots.
That's why the complement series Dreemit's World seems crucial. It adds that visual feel that could help draw your new audience into your fiction pieces. It's great that you got back into it when you did. As you put it, perfect timing :D