On Anna's story, it was fun, lighthearted romp. It's always nice when a character has accepted the things he/she can't control and just make the best of it. I'm very interested to see what kind of speedbump you have in store. It's awesome that her friends are very supportive of her though. A refreshing dynamic from the trend of non-acceptance.

The second part was arguably the better half mainly because of the style of writing. There's a tinge of desperation and a hint of claustrophobia with every line. It's so amazing! Great job, my friend :D