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RE: Reborn: Chapter Thirty Six "Lost and Found"

in #fiction8 years ago

This definitely belongs near the top of my favorite chapters! Even with Anna's newfound powers, you still effectively scripted her vulnerability. It just goes to show that there's still some human aspect left in her. That really lends itself to the rich characterization you have meticulously spent to build her up. It's often quite easy to just write a "Mary Sue", and it takes a special skill to write a powerful yet equally fragile character. You have that skill in spades, my friend :D

Nice hand-off to Jenna's journey. I like how the middle part was a literal baton pass from Anna's perspective to Jenna's. This flowed very nicely. Good thing I don't have to wait a whole day to read Harri's story. Starting the next chapter now :)

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