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RE: Reborn: Chapter Sixty Four "Caught"

in #fiction7 years ago

After missing this for a couple of days, I'm surprised to discover such a jam-packed chapter. That Paulo guy is hella creepy. It's nice to see a pure villain emerge in the story. I was sad about Harri and the others leaving, but by the end I wanted them to stay so they would've been protected. A wrench in the story is inevitable I guess. That tense feeling of dread near the end was scripted quite well. It really emphasized the fragility of the other characters. Nice job, my friend!

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