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RE: Reborn: Chapter Four

in #fiction7 years ago

When you develop characters, you really develop them. With only four (or five, including The Scene) chapters in, and they feel fully fleshed out. The dynamics have been established, and you can feel the emotion seep through every dialogue. While I never experienced what they are going through in real life, I could really feel like I'm living the moment with every one of them. Anna has really shaped up to be a great lead, and all the other characters are great foils. There are no redundant characterizations, and the conversations are just so crisp. Another prime example of why you're going to be one of the top fiction writers here someday, my friend! :D

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