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RE: Reborn: Chapter Fifteen "Monster"
This was such a jam-packed chapter which moved things along! The story is so engrossing, and the dialogue shines as its strength once again. I'm glad to see that it's coming full circle, and I'm interested to see where the story will lead once The Scene becomes one with the current timeline. You're tying everything up quite nicely, so great job, my friend! That is no easy feat :D
So you did see that this is where the Scene fits in right? It is now caught up! I put that at the end of this chapter. In fact it's a good idea to re-read the scene because there's information in it that is pertinent to the story, and considering people's questions about Jake it's likely the information is not remembered.
Thank you, once again you've made my day ;)
I have Chapter Sixteen queue up now but I've already upvoted it ahead! Yes! Great job tying it all together. Will definitely re-read The Scene before reading Sixteen. Scene. Sixteen. Rhyme!!
Oh boy, chapter sixteen is a bit x-rated. I had it in mind to warn you, but i forgot. Something interesting I've learned over the last few years-statistically men enjoy visual pornography a great deal more than women do, conversely women enjoy reading sexually descriptive scenes in novels fare more than men. Although the sexual scene in that chapter is not the kind women prefer, they prefer it when love or at the very least passion is involved. But there is a reason for it, I don't write things like that to be frivolous. He is a shocking character in every way lol.
That definitely caught me by surprise, but I'm getting a bit used to it since I've been reading Today Again. Yeah, I've discovered that assumption to be quite true as well. Your choice to write it that way really worked, and I'm sure that every word was written with purpose. I fully trust your process and I'm enjoying this series ever since The Scene :D
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