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RE: Reborn: Chapter Eleven "The Unseen"
Another conversation-heavy chapter that flows oh so well. You should start labeling these with a @dreemit copyright, because you've really improved with every installment. I like how they're still surprised about the existence of supernatural phenomena even though they've been battling the shadow men for all of their lives. It really gives the story a more grounded feel. Amazing job as always, my friend! Keep 'em coming :D
I put myself in their shoes, I mean seriously live in their brains while writing this--I imagine I'm Anna and this is all really happening, haha! And many of the characters in the story are based on people i know really well, and I pretty much know how they would react also.
Thank you from the bottom of my heart, lovely friend!
I'd bet, what with all the similarities, hailing from New York state and such. I do think it's fairly standard that the characters are based off of real people. It really gives an added layer (or depth, if you will) to the characters.