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RE: Reborn: Chapter Eighteen "Alive"
I was expecting to catch up on Today Again, but this was such a nice surprise. If I were to rank the stories presently, this would certainly be at the top! Nice balance of story progression, pacing, dialogue and characterization. Your skill for painting imagery is on full display here. Will be catching up on the next chapter after eating lunch, but I've already voted that ahead of time because I'm sure it'll be equally awesome :D
That's great to hear! Yes, I got a little stuck on the editing of the next chapter of Today Again. Actually the chapter after that is ready, haha, but there was just this one scene that was bothering me. Sometimes when you pick to hard at it, it just gets worse, so I decided it would be best to leave it be for a bit. who knows, I might make them middle of the week posts instead this time :)
But I am definitely really glad that you're enjoying "my baby" lol.
Let it marinate and air out for a bit. I'm sure you'll write the most optimal story once you look at it with fresh eyes. Greatness can't be rushed :D
Yup, lol! Tomorrow I'll be posting my part in the first chapter of corestory. I'll also put in the links for the previous three parts. I know that fisteganos is looking for more people to join (I still want you to be one of them) I recruited @therealpaul, haha!
Woohoo! I can't wait! :D @fisteganos and I have really made strides in terms of mutually giving feedback to our posts in recent days, so that's awesome. I've been lagging behind of real-life obligations, so I'm a bit swamped with it. I still do hope that I could contribute one day. Hopefully the group lives on long enough until I get my stuff done :D