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RE: Reborn: Chapter Eight "Goodbye"

in #fiction8 years ago

Woah! That was a packed chapter! Another well-written entry for this series. I like how normal everyday events are interlaced with the supernatural themes so seamlessly. It makes the series grounded and relatable. I mean, I'm not a woman, but even I feel like I'm living in Anna's shoes with the way you write. Dialogue and the character dynamic stands as the strength of this chapter. I can't help but feel that these chapters are the slow ascent in a roller coaster. I'm anxiously awaiting the rapid descent into chaos. Great work, my friend!

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