I like the new intro, it really gives a sense that this is a continuing adventure. Your writing really seems to improve leaps and bounds with every episode. The dialogue is very compelling and the pace of the story feels just right. This was a great installment, and it certainly made me keep a tab open on Steemit for a while.

I just saw your mention in postpromotion, so I just wanted to drop a note to say thanks. I really appreciate the send-off! A slow walk toward the sunset/horizon feels much better than a sudden whimper.