Very suspenseful piece. You really painted a very claustrophobic tale. I like what you did with your world-building. Initially I thought that it might be too wordy, but it all came together well. I'm so glad that I was proven wrong :D Great job!
Very suspenseful piece. You really painted a very claustrophobic tale. I like what you did with your world-building. Initially I thought that it might be too wordy, but it all came together well. I'm so glad that I was proven wrong :D Great job!
Thank you. I am glad you liked it. I could tighten up the top parts