A Day in the Clouds (Chapter 8) - The Hours Between 1200 and 1300
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Back to where I was. After years of travel and countless adventures, I have circled back to where I was before. An overwhelming feeling of melancholy enveloped me upon the realization of the predicament I found myself in.
Upon being welcomed back by the entire prison compound, I was suddenly whisked back to the fortress that I was previously imprisoned in. Years have not changed its structural integrity; the wooden ramparts still haven’t decayed, the tiles still haven’t cracked and the reflectorized mirrors still haven’t lost its shimmer. It looked the same as it did when I escaped.
Teten sat at the dining table mewling softly. Mamie looked at her with disdain and still couldn’t contain her own sobbing. Dadier looked somber as he fed Eddie, all the while Eddie … Well, Eddie looked about as clueless as when I had left — it didn’t seem that he grew taller, if anything he just became chubbier, so that’s good, I guess.
There was not much of a gathering in the mess hall; the other giants were nowhere to be found. The air was silent; there was no chattering that echoed throughout the fortress, only quiet sobbing.
From time to time, Mamie berated Teten for something that I wasn’t quite sure of. Lowla emerged from out of nowhere and comforted the weeping prisoner. Perhaps in the time that I was away, Teten had fallen from the giants’ good graces, with Lowla the only one left vouching for her membership. Serves you right, traitor.
Indignant, Mamie stood up from the table and strode up to the upper floor of the fortress, tears still falling heavily from her eyes. In her absence, she had requested Lowla to continue force feeding me. Dadier averted his gaze as she went up the staircase.
What could have been ailing Mamie? How did it relate to Teten’s own crying? Could it have anything to do with my escape? Was Mamie punished for her oversight, and in turn she punished Teten? This hypothesis couldn’t be too far off from reality.
Lowla stopped feeding me and unstrapped me from the seat. I wasn’t even full, yet I didn’t notice that I had already finished an entire plate. Years of travelling had resulted to a ravenous hunger that had yet to be sated.
"Come on now," Lowla urged me, extending a hand.
I refused to grab hold but agreed to walk close behind. By the time we left the table, everyone had already gone. I hadn’t noticed when Teten’s sniveling became silenced or when Dadier took Eddie away.
The temperature inside the fortress felt cooler than I remembered, or maybe my body was still adjusting from being exposed to the sun for weeks on end. Winds that slid through the cracks of the supposedly impregnable fortress began to hurt when it grazed my skin.
I stretched my legs and began to make my way up the stairs. Suddenly, just as I was beginning my ascent, my knees buckled and I slipped down.
Lowla charged down furiously and lifted me from the ground. She caressed my head and set me down on a large, crimson cushion.
"O what happened?" she asked dotingly, placing her hand on my forehead. “Is everything alright?”
"I-I’m alright," I replied hoarsely. I wasn’t quite sure if I had vocalized my reply or I just thought about it. Feeling a bit woozy, I grunted as I tried to push her hand away so that I could regain movement.
"You’re burning up," she followed worriedly. “Poor thing.”
I didn’t feel that I was burning; in fact, I felt the opposite. It felt like I was back high above the mountaintops — the crisp, chill air, the smell of pine and the sound of distant waterfalls.
Lowla stood up and scavenged around a nearby cabinet for something.
I grabbed my knee and coughed on the cushion. All of a sudden, a strange feeling came over me, incapacitating me where I lay. Sticky liquid began to fill my nose, obstructing my breathing. I gasped for air even as I continued to cough. Grasping on the cushion, I felt a huge weight holding me down.
Lowla eventually came to my aid and lifted my head up. Breathing became easier but it remained taxing to do so. She wiped me with a warm white towel and lightly patted my back.
My throat began to fill with the same sticky substance that clogged my nose. I tried to cough it out, but it filled twice as faster. Sweat perspired out of my body at an alarming rate. My head felt heavy and strange lights started to appear.
The giant hoisted me up as she continually patted my back. Lowla took a towel and attached it beneath my clothing. She stroked my hair and whispered a garbled, hissing tune.
I felt detached from my body, like I was floating just outside. My vision started to blur and a strange noise began to ring in my ear.
What was happening to me? Did this wretched giant poison me as punishment for my foiled escape? Maybe that was the reason the meal was so short — it wasn’t for sustenance at all! Rather, it could’ve been poison that was forced on me.
Although, this could be my body failing me after years without eating or drinking while I was outside. The harsh landscape might have only now taken its toll on me.
However, a combination of both was the most likely reason.
As I headed on to Mamie arms, I expected serious repercussions for my actions but I never expected poison as the mode of punishment. The giants became smarter right after I enacted my escape.
Soon enough, it became pretty hard to open my eyes. It seemed as if the strange liquid began to ooze out of my eyes, plastering the lids shut. I tried to scratch them loose, but Lowla swatted my arms away.
"Ssh," she continued to whisper, as if silencing me until the poison had taken full effect.
Had my senses become so dull that I didn’t even realize the deception behind the seemingly innocuous gestures? This was her plan all along, executed with stone-cold precision, and my exhaustion prevented me from spotting it. If I wasn’t feeling terrible I would’ve commended her on a job well done.
My absence has allowed these giants to formulate protocols to deal with miscreants. I never thought my actions would lead to this.
Lowla carried me up the steps and slowly placed me on my former bunk. She exchanged my soiled clothes for a fresh pair, and covered me with a warm blanket.
The added layer of cloth didn’t at all help with the chill. I tried to calm myself as I shivered involuntarily. The ringing in my ear became louder.
From a distance, I saw Mamie walking towards us. She had stopped crying but her armor was still moist from all her tears. The bottom of her eyes swelled and the creases on her face became more noticeable. She rubbed my forehead right before she placed her lips against it.
The giant’s lips were strangely soothing. It was soft and warm to the touch, providing me with comfort that neither the clothes nor the blanket was able to.
I closed my eyes, still trying to calm myself down. My mind drifted away, untethered from my body. These were the last of my thoughts.
I had wished that if I were to fall, I would do so as a free man, but that may have been too much to ask for. My mouth dried up and it became strenuous to swallow.
I imagined myself laying on the scalding pavement I once traveled on. Thinking back, I couldn’t remember why I was complaining so much. Being cold was a far harsher state, regardless of popular belief. It has been said that the cold was better because you only needed to add layers of clothing for warmth, but the heat would allow you only limited clothing to remove. That saying was useless especially when you couldn’t even move by yourself.
With my eyes shut, a giant forced a strange-tasting liquid on my mouth — I wasn’t sure if it was Mamie or Lowla. It could have been a second dose of poison or a short-term remedy to prolong the pain, I didn’t know. I was at their mercy.
Strange as it was, I felt at peace with everything. My escape turned out to be a failure but I have learned a lot during the entire process. If I were to escape from this affliction mostly intact, I knew now where I went wrong and I wasn’t the type to make the same mistake twice.
I coughed and wheezed, now almost bereft of air. It was a strange, yet effective, punishment device I was subjected to. I should’ve been more careful — I knew that now. There was no time to let my guard down around these giants, that much I was certain about. Too bad all these realizations came at the end.
I opened my eyes and saw Mamie and Lowla having a discussion. There were lots of hand gestures being thrown around that it almost seemed like they were having an argument. My ears were still ringing and I could hear nothing about what they were talking about. All I knew was that their lips were moving and they were pacing around.
I-I couldn’t maintain my consciousness … couldn’t maintain my thoughts. Lost for words I tried to motioned to them, requesting if I could get a glass of water to drink, but they were too busy to notice me.
The door opened. The glare of the sun made it hard to make out who was making their way inside. I wasn’t quite sure but I thought I saw Doma carrying Eddie in her arms. Mamie conversed with her and seemed as if she was shooing them away. Lowla went outside and closed the door behind her, leaving Mamie alone to relish her triumph.
The giant let out deep sighs, and switched between stroking my hair and placing her lips against my head. It was very unnerving; like a villainous speech without anyone speaking.
The door flung open once again, and in came Lowla with a clear glass of water in her hand. She passed the glass to Mamie, who then administered the beverage to me. Mamie lifted my head and eased the liquid to my mouth. My cough interrupted the transfer, but was resumed once it subsided.
It became painful to swallow, like there was a thorn pinching my throat. My lips were dry as a desert and my joints ached from the inside. Exhaustion was hitting me with full force; it was allowing the poison to course through me faster than it normally would.
Mamie lay beside me and wrapped me in her arms. I felt her body vibrate, following an almost rhythmic tune. Her cuddle provided a level of warmth that the layer of fabric didn’t. Why was she trying to warm me up now? It was all very confusing.
Perhaps the food fed to me was supposedly for Eddie? I mean, we were the only ones that remained. Or, was it, in fact, for Teten? That hypothesis was supported by Mamie’s haranguing of her earlier. If the accidentally switched poison hypothesis was correct, then that could explain why Mamie and Lowla seemed like they were arguing not that long ago.
I can’t think about all those now. Must … concentrate on getting warm. I need to—
Focusing my viento would be useless. In fact, it might even be detrimental, as it might be powerful enough to push Mamie away. At that point, Mamie was the only thing that was keeping me warm. The thought of owing the giant was almost unbearable.
But wait … I would owe her nothing. They were the ones who put me in this mess. If anything, it would be a service to them if I kept myself alive. If they were indeed preparing me for something, then my demise would be a major wrench to their plans.
It became very conflicting. On one hand, my death would spell the fall of the giants and somehow right the wrongs my actions have resulted to, while on another, well … let’s just say I wanted to live more than I wanted to become triumphant against my adversaries.
Thinking became a bit taxing. I stopped fidgeting and concentrated on getting myself warm. This was not how I imagined my triumphant return would have looked like. I would have to beat my enemies some other time, in some other way.

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I'm making time to finally read your work, and from the announcement post : A Day in the Clouds - Original Novel for Steemit Series Announcement I'm already most intrigued and wish you the most success for this project bro.
It's always a joy to read your writing as it is seamless in nature and I too can relate to find myself zoning in where as to others I may be perceived as zoning out. And I too have a cousin who is near his mid 20s and has the same conditions but is able to speak a bit but with relatively considerable effort, and requires a lot of patience, love and understanding.
He is a gentle giant, stutters often, and loves to play the guitar and clap his hands, especially receiving hi fives from others. I believe your novel to be founded on a profound notion with more pros to be found than cons and hopefully the whales will have found you to be a pro in your literary writing abilities as I also acknowledge such skillfulness.
And hopefully Zepp can one day express to you his thoughts and give knowledgeable feedback and insight on how accurate or true your interpretive perspective and approach on his outlook of life is, which is emotionally and precisely woven/intertwined with your influence and inspiration. I'll get to Chapter 1 as soon as I can, just wanted to give you my initial thoughts first and foremost and I can relate somewhat from the outside in/indirectly.
Most blessings to you and your family bro. Upvoted as always
It's so good to see you in here! I love it when my friendships in here end up finding one another, friendship circles are grand to have in a place like this :)
An interconnected community for the win! You're 100% responsible for bridging @verbal-d and I together, my friend :D
Thanks for leaving your thoughts, bro, always very thoughtful! Double thanks for sharing that story as well. I'm so glad that the comments section elicit that kind of sharing. Warms my heart to read stories like that. People like that are my inspirations for embarking in this project, and I just wish that I could extend my help to all of them.
With regard to the whales, I'm forever hopeful, though, now passed the third of the novel, I really hope that support comes through. Sadly, the bulk of the donations are going elsewhere, for different reasons. While I'm happy for the recipients, I just wish that some of the love were spread @zeppelin's way. They don't even have to come through my work.
Your hopes and thoughts will reach my cousin and her family, brother. I sincerely wish for the same thing. I hope that I would look back at this in a few years and discuss it with Zepp himself so that he could compare his own thoughts with what I perceived. This is really all about him, and I just wish I could help him out more. I appreciate you sharing your advanced thoughts, my bro! Bless you to the moon!
You're most welcome bro, and yeah, hopefully more whales come your way and in the future you can publish your book and sell it to further help your family! Most of blessings and success bro.
Yeah, that's the plan, man. My previously self-published book didn't turn out so well, so I changed my strategy and tried to get a following first. So far, it's not working well (LOL!) but I'm still hopeful. Head up high, eyes on the prize.
Always positive thoughts bro, success doesn't always come easy, and the best things are least expected and worth waiting for. Us being so young, our patience is definitely tested, though through doing so, wisdom comes through these trying times and experiences. All the best to you bro.
Very well put, my bro. Even your comments sound poetic! "The strongest steel is forged by the fires of hell," definitely rings true indeed.
"What was happening to me? Did this wretched giant poison me as punishment for my foiled escape? Maybe that was the reason the meal was so short — it wasn’t for sustenance at all! Rather, it could’ve been poison that was forced on me."
I love it when Ledd goes into his accusatory mode. It is absolutely hilarious what he comes up with for his reasonings and assumptions.
"With my eyes shut, a giant forced a strange-tasting liquid on my mouth — I wasn’t sure if it was Mamie or Lowla. It could have been a second dose of poison or a short-term remedy to prolong the pain, I didn’t know. I was at their mercy."
"It became painful to swallow, like there was a thorn pinching my throat. My lips were dry as a desert and my joints ached from the inside. Exhaustion was hitting me with full force; it was allowing the poison to course through me faster than it normally would."
So many quotable as always, and many of us can relate to the terrible symptoms of the flu and speaking of Heatstroke, my parents live in Arizona and it gets pretty hot there. It has the highest death rates from heat stroke in all the USA.
Poor Ledd. I'm sick right now and it is only getting worse as time passes, but I'll be back at 100% when I can be.
"Perhaps the food fed to me was supposedly for Eddie? I mean, we were the only once that remained. Or, was it, in fact, for Teten? That hypothesis was supported by Mamie’s haranguing of her earlier. If the accidentally switched poison hypothesis was correct, then that could explain why Mamie and Lowla seemed like they were arguing not that long ago."
Another great thought from Ledd, it really shows your level of skill to contrast the actions and his opinions on what's happening to him, around him, and his surroundings.
Oh shoot! A typo! Damnnn... Thanks for quoting it, brother! If it weren't for you I wouldn't have spotted it haha! Man, that turned out to be super helpful :)
Haha! I love how you put it: "accusatory mode". It's indeed what he's doing, and it's funny because the real intentions are the complete opposite of what he thinks. It's a question of primal vs social. We know that the people around him are doing the things they do because they care for him, but that's because of our preconceived notions. What if we didn't know why they were doing what they were doing? Compounded with the hypothesis that they're out to get him. These questions are what interest me when I wrote this.
It's great to revisit these, and your comments afford me the opportunity. So, thank you, bro. Remind your parents to always hydrate, but I'm sure they know that already since they've lived their whole lives there.
Ahh I love the completely different sense of time XD Reminds me of a cartoon one of my kids was watching where one character says to another one "I waited for five whole minutes!" and the other responds "You have to be really patient! ADULTS ARE SLOW!" or something to that effect XD
ETA: also the thought process is now along the lines of a confusing "oh well better luck next time Ledd...if you recover from the deadly heat stroke" and OMG CHILD YOU DON'T UNDERSTAND XD
HAHA! Very well put! It's much better than the comparison I had envisioned when I was writing that part. I think it goes along the lines of Godzilla gets a splinter while he's walking around a city. It cries foul, but then again it just left an entire city destroyed. It's all about perspective, and that's what I enjoy playing on :)
Another thought that popped up, which is completely backed by science (* cough *), is how when Ant-Man in Captain America: Civil War was so slow when he was giant-sized. It's because objects of that size are operating on a different timescale than objects that are significantly slower :) haha science!
Thanks for you continued support, my friend! As always, your comments are very entertaining :D
Wow, I really could feel that fever, imagine myself cuddling up against the warmth of my mom's body when I was in that state, I mean it brought me right there.
It is so cool to be inside of his head, I can't express how well you do that, how I can feel what he's feeling, and the thoughts he has seem so possible, even as I know that of course his family who loves him would never hurt him.
At some point after you finish posting it on steemit I am definitely going to read it from cover to cover. I think I might have said that before, but just in case I only thought it, Im saying it now. It's so good, it needs a second read through. Once I can read it all ;)
Love it, bring on more!!
I'm so happy about the reception this chapter is getting! My supporters (however few) are truly the best :D
I really dug deep to get an accurate reaction here. It was pretty hard, but I'm so glad that my efforts have been validated. I really went all the way back to my childhood experiences to script an accurate depiction. This wouldn't have been the same if it was written in the third-person. I've really developed a huge respect for writing in the first-person, even though I feel that it's going to be quite a while until I write the same way again.
Thanks so much for saying that, my friend! It truly warms my heart to know people regard my story like this. I'm not ashamed to admit that my eyes well up with every positive comment :') I appreciate your continued support, my friend! Truly invaluable :D
Oh, I feel the same way about your support, believe me, I think I might feel a little lost without it. I generally don't get that way, maybe so I won't have to feel disappointed, but in your case I definitely have come to depend on it!
I'm so glad you're such an excellent writer, that we can both enjoy one another's stories!
As I said to @fisteganos, we learn from each others' work :) It's just so awesome that writers from different background and with different writing styles stumbled upon each other and grow by reading and supporting each others' work. I can't imagine any other platform where that would be possible.
You really took your time crafting this amazing work of art and i'm honored to be able to learn from you.
Great job once again, my friend! I'm really enjoying the ride.
We all learn from each other, my friend! I'm learning just as much (or even more) from how you write. That's the beauty of mutual support here on this platform. We all grow together :D
It's a shame that not a lot of people engage the same way. I'm just lucky to have stumbled upon you when I did. I give @dreemit full credit for that :)
The not so triumphant return!! Another great installment. I thought at first he was being sick when the fluid was filling his throat, it was a great description of succumbing to heat stroke. I presume it was ha at some because of the sun outside and the rapid onset!
I really had to dig deep with my past experiences here, and even consulted my family for accuracy. (Living in house full of doctors has its advantages it seems) The downside for me is that whenever I write something, I act it out most of the time. For a second there, I felt it becoming a sort of placebo effect and I was suffering from heat stroke as well. Damn my imaginative head! I glad I snapped out of it immediately haha! Thanks for leaving your thoughts, dude! Your continued support is highly appreciated :D
Haha, I suspect it's quite common. In fact I would like to say the best writers probably do it. When I am doing one of my crime'y or horror piecesi get a slight sore head from it all whirling about!!
Glad to hear I'm not alone! Yeah.. my self-published book dealt with pretty heavy stuff, so that was really hard to write, especially when I'm acting out the scenes. My family gets a kick out of it though. I've been told that I'm very entertaining to watch because I mouth out different voices for the different characters. To this day, I'm not quite sure if they're making fun of me or complimenting my style haha!
Nesting limit nonsense. I will be glad when they get rid of that!
I don't doubt it for a moment!!
That'll be the update that we frequent commenters have been waiting a long time for! Haha
Lol, I do that too!! All manner of voices an actions!!!
Haha! Maybe that's why we became fast friends. Because we operate on the same frequency :)
Really noticed the dual time structures in this episode, and it works. Plays into the fantasy style story Zepp has going on in his world, as opposed to the world he actually finds himself in.
His struggles and his perceptions of them and the world around him are what creates the energy in this story, and you handle them well, in my opinion.
I really wanted to sink him and the readers deeper with every chapter. By the end, it's my hope that the line between reality and fiction is all but non-existent. Thanks for noting that, and I appreciate the recognition. I've said it before, and I'll never tire of it, coming from a writer that I admire immensely, that's a huge compliment! I really worked hard in trying to balance perceptions so I'm happy with the validation you gave. Thanks for that, mate! Gratitude for your unwavering support :D
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