The Apple of Evil : A 5 Minute Freewrite
Today’s Prompt is not a word but rather a picture. Photo credit : @deadgrlsuppastar
“I standsie then, in the green infested land of thy Lord and speeds ye of His judgements upon the weaks and writhing manfools.”
She finished her prayer with a promise today, a promise that needed to be upheld, a promise obligatory to be welcomed in the kingdom of Lord, to prod and devour the fervent fruit of heavens. “How sweet will be the taste of heaven’s apple”, she murmured to herself..
She was walking hysterically now. Breaths were getting louder, heart pounding out of her chest, head leaped in delirium. She was now closing in on target...
“Can i help you, mam”, inquired the private security officer gaurding the gates of a night club..
“Haan?” It was like the officer’s question had brought her down back to earth.
“I said if i could help you mam. You seem a bit lost and your forehead is bleeding a bit. Everything alright mam?”
“ Manfool, how dare you run your filthy mouth infront of me?” She said, “let me in or i shall smite thee..”
The officer chuckled and let her in thinking it was a theatrical bit..
She got to the centre of dance floor and shouted, “In the name of thy lord, i condemn all of you manfools to hell..”
Boooooommm
She woke up after sometime amidst raging fire engulfing all around her.. “How could this be? How am i alive? May be my Lord wants me to do more to cleanse this earth from the filth..”
Round and round she went to find a way through the fire but couldn’t..
Little did she know that she was condemned to hell and the manfools she had slaughtered were plucking apples from the trees of heaven.
Posted in 5 minute freewrite project, arranged by @mariannewest.
Thumbnail image is prompt image. Rest of the images are taken from pixabay
Well done! I'm impressed by the strength of the scene you depicted notwithstanding starting from that picture.
Aww thank you so much..
Awesome fiction writing. You are so talented. Seriously the end shocked me. This is the work of your imagination.
But what is the theme of this story, can't figure out
Thank you so much for the appreciation.. i couldnt understand what did you mean by “theme of the this story”? Did you mean to say that how did i choose this topic??
Creativity sometimes takes us to very strange and but somehow familiar places. My mind was on a good ride! Awesome freewrite :)
Thank you for such kind words.. ^_^
This is terrific! There was so much power in the witch's fervency! Now she's paying the terrible price for thinking it was her duty to pass judgment.
That was intense! And I sure hope that there are some eternal consequences for senseless murder.